is this poem supose to be funny???cuz i laughed, I didnt mean to, lol i just started laughing...You wrote it beautifully, and i really hope this poem was ment to be funny, if not i am soooo sorry, mabey it's my twisted mind..lol who knows..lol anyways i definately could read this over again...great job!!! 5/5

it wasnt ment to be funny but it wasnt ment to be serious.. if u thought it was funny then im flattered because I thought that I couldnt write funny stuff.. thanx for all of your comments

lol opps wrong one.. this one wasnt ment to be anything really, I was just bored and I wasnt sure where to put it... Im glad that u thought it was funny because like i said b4 i didnt think i could write funny stuff.. thanx for your comment :D

i was just bored and thats where it came from, im not really sure what my inspiration was to tell u the truth but im glad that you liked it

I never though about it like that but now that you mention it I can see what you mean. And ive actually felt like that a few times so that might explain where the poem came from. Im glad that it made you think, thats what I love to hear when i write my poems. thanx for your comments they are greatly appriciated.