wow this is really awesome. thanks for the sweet comment :] it made me feel better. keep writing!

If you want more like that check out also "my first time," and ummm... theres one more, oh yeah "make love." I want to write more erotic ones though, I have fun doing those ;)
You dont have any poems, otherwise I would comment :(
With love, K Kristina

heh u have awesome talent and u realli have a way with words! keep it up! thanks for commenting on my poems bye girly!

wow, hey thanx for the compliments i dont really right much but mostly when i upset or worrying about something, man i love your poema like the explict ones you right, man they really grab me, but anywayz if you want to e-mail me my adress is heavymetalist_666@hotmail.com,
thanx again for the comments

Very Hot

Wow, this one really brings vivid imagery to the table. I loved the flow and how easily it read. Great work

wow..thats incredible...really passionate and lustfull...loved it...xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

=o Wooah! Nicely done =)

i am emailing this to my bf telling him this is what i want

wow! talk about vivid

Great job. very sexy. i loved it.

great poem i really enjoyed it

get a 5 from me

wow!! great poem!! keep it up!! :)

Oh my god, wow. The perfect description of.. Everything.. You did a great job with the details.. I love all your poems! Keep writing I can't wait for more!

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Yeah I'm a virgin, thanks for the comments guys. Always glad to... um.... stimulate... emotion... or something else... ;)

awesome.....thats all I can say.....just awesome......5

do you speek of expierence or do you have such a great imagination your work is awsome to turn people on with words is hard to do and you do it great . wow

Some AMAZING lines in there
and an overall great poem