Do you care?

by Laura   Dec 7, 2004


Slice me up.
I don't care.
If you don't, why am i still here?
I called out to you, In hope to fly.
But then i saw the real you and i began to cry.
I love you, with my whole heart.
I hold you so dear.
So goodbye forever.
Cause tomorrow i won't be here

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    Simple and true love it great job keep it up like this, great Job!!!! 5/5
    *If you want check mine and tell me what you think:) Thanx!
    Love
    AnAstAciA
    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xCezx

    Sounds like you've been really hurt!
    if you ever need to talk 2 anyone you can personal message me! kk :)
    cez xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by greg

    EXCELLENT {POEM!!!!!! Ran very well you should be very proud

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