by Sean Allen Dec 8, 2004
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Pink Tiki torch light: |
by Aken Sol
Hmm.... I like it. Uh, might wanna check out your third stanza and the whole bit about sin. That line doesn't really flow right. Read it once over again and you'll notice how all the other lines have a longer ring to it. And damn, that's one crazy format u got there :-D |
by Lance Hardy
You're a bit confusing to me sir. Heh. |
by FTS Miles
That is a fantastic poem. A wicked and enjoyable ride. :) |