I can only imagine that whoever rated this down just did not get it. And who knows... maybe I don't, though I think I do. But I sure can read a wonderful event into it from the amalgam of your words and my experience. And in that, I think it's a great poem. Curt but anticipatory.

Lol I'm pretty sure what you are writing about...lmao. Funny stuff...oh its a love poem? oops =P.

Frst thing that came to mind, street racing. LoL. I don't know why. But then i guess it's about how fast love can be or something along the lines of that. Nice
Aken Sol

lol yea, i kind find it funny that, street racing came to mind. Still great writing none the less
-Allen