Wow.. this one was phenominal! I loved it so much. Your writing seems to be getting better and better ( if that's at all possible! lol ) Great job. Take care!

oh wow i really like this poem a lot. u show a lot of emotion in your poems and i love that. thank you for all of your comments. God bless.loves.

Wow. A hypothetical thought expands and broods, but the end revelation is totally unexpected. A great theme explored, well written, with an unsettling ending. Again, wow.