Awesome writing....Your words I always ponder....

i really admired this piece of work. Your words flowed thoroughly and I liked the topic and quotations around the words we use to describe our world.

"or more so dominates my sense
with scrapings of ancient days,
hatred love ecstasy anguish
bled upon a tableau of "real" world,
unseen, unheard, except by
those for whom it claws."

I completly admired that stance. It was powerful and intriguing, good job, beautiful piece.

Great write. The poem flowed throughout and i really liked your choice of words. I thought this was a powerful piece. Thanks for sharing.