by Robert Dec 8, 2004
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
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by Wallace
Cery good, but I believe you meant 'I am an angel'. It kinda makes more sense to me. The lines were great, you had some good imagery and overall a nice piece, I dont see any reason not to give it 5/5 |
This is very effective, with good descriptions and vivid imagery. The idea for the poem is unique which made this really great read. |
This is a really nice poem. I really liked it. I'm not even that religious, but I liked it. |
by Ashley Ann
"Our God is what we live and die for" was my fav line.. good write nicely penned 5/5 |
Wonderful write minus the few misspellings mentioned above. interesting as is all your work. This poem clearly shows the work put into it and it was a nice trip different from the array of poems I see daily. 5/5 good work |