Comments : I Am An Angle

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    good poem, has a nice feel, even though I'm not particularly religious, I liked it...

    oh, are you 90 degrees, 180 or what?
    (it's angel not, angle lol)

    take care and keep up the good work hun!

    emma x

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    You spelled it angle, like 90 degrees; it's angel, like from Heaven. I am somewhat religous, and I really like this poem. It has a good flow to it. ^^ 5/5
    ~Steff

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Other than a few speeling errors, that have already been pointed out, you did an excellent job, once again. I am not really very relious so this didn't really hold my attention, but I assure you that it was me not you, for your word choice and vocab was perfectly amazing, and the emtion was deep and powerful. Again another great write, keep up the good work, and please keep writting, and I will keep reading.

  • 17 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    I was going to see if you noticed that you spelled angle, instead of angel... but overall it was really good and really meaningful!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wonderful write minus the few misspellings mentioned above. interesting as is all your work. This poem clearly shows the work put into it and it was a nice trip different from the array of poems I see daily. 5/5 good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    "Our God is what we live and die for" was my fav line.. good write nicely penned 5/5

  • This is a really nice poem. I really liked it. I'm not even that religious, but I liked it.

    Keep up the good work.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is very effective, with good descriptions and vivid imagery. The idea for the poem is unique which made this really great read.
    Flow is little off in some places, because the poem has no syllable count.
    All in all, good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Cery good, but I believe you meant 'I am an angel'. It kinda makes more sense to me. The lines were great, you had some good imagery and overall a nice piece, I dont see any reason not to give it 5/5