by Jacob Davis Dec 8, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
He slides his fingers up through her hair. |
by Jacob Davis
lol...thanx everyone. |
by Lucy
nice, thats so creative and talent driven, i've never read anything by you before, but i'm lettin you know i will now, this poem was great...Lee nicole |
by Lady Vamp
this is sooo good.... and getting me to say that is like asking me to chop off my head...in other words not very easy.... please write more |
by Jacob Davis
Thank you so much, comments like that are what keep me writing. It means ALOT. |
by pinkalias
wow, this is an incredibly piece of dark poetry. I have no idea why the rating is so low. you painted a mystifying and lusty piscture in the beginning, and as the piece went on the darkness increased. Your word choice is a powerful tool in this poem and sets a dark scenery blended with terrible and beautiful imagery. |