by Sarcastic Poet Dec 8, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I would just like to say i copied the 1st line from this person that had a quote.i hope that person doesn't mind.The rest is made by me;) |
I think its very good! you have a nice way of rhyming but if i had any suggestions, it would be to lengthen your sentences but thats just me, everyone has there own way of writting so just go with your flow! if you could, comment on "The Wonderful Place" because i feel that its the best one ive written, and i also am trying to find out what people think of it! |
I LOVED IT!!! I'm going tru da same thing :,( |