I LOVED IT!!! I'm going tru da same thing :,(

I think its very good! you have a nice way of rhyming but if i had any suggestions, it would be to lengthen your sentences but thats just me, everyone has there own way of writting so just go with your flow! if you could, comment on "The Wonderful Place" because i feel that its the best one ive written, and i also am trying to find out what people think of it!

Sarah Jenkins