Wow this is so sad and very hard to read. I bet it was very hard to write! I'm so sorry to hear about your son! Stay Strong! Brooke 5/5

That was tremendous, I really liked that poem. It literally made a tear go down my face, i am truely sorry for your loss.

-The Wounded Poet

I am so sorry that happened to you. Take care Beautiful poe

oops spelling error poem*

I don't even feel as though I have the right to comment. Truly, that was beautiful.

Very touching and totally beautiful. hmm, maybe work on the flow. The number of words you had in each line varied a bit too much so the flow got a bit messed up. Try working on that. Otherwise good poem, keep writing.
Satuxxa

Oh hun that sent shivers down my spine! I nearly cried! He will be watching over you and everything will be alright. My friend had a little girl and she died. It was heartbreaking but she's got the comfort of knowing that she'll be alright. She has photo's to look back on. Hope you are ok and thanks for the comments :)

Wow. That was amazing. So touching and beautiful. I'm so sorry about your loss. Keep writing.

♥LostSoul