ANOTHER AMAZING POEM HUN :D keep up the good work, i'd mark it higer than 5 if i could!!!! xxxxxxxx

Thanku! xxx

Thanku so much hun!! xxx

Thanku! (again!) lol xxx

wow. wonderful. relly liked the lines

How soon is it now before I sparkle and fade?
Close my eyes to disappear
Halfway to anywhere, a place I've made
With a single drop of a tear

hope you're ok, an keep ya head up. lu -x-x-x-

Thanku hun! It means a lot! :-) xx

ace hun no other word i can think of 4 it! i would give u more than 5 if i cud!

Thanku so so so much!! x

this is an really great poem, i think i kinda got the story but it may take me awhile to really get it lol! neways loved full 5 for u! nicole x

really good, fantastic use of metaphors. xxx

Your best one. Definately. I shed a tear for you.

take care

Thanku so much!!! xxxxxxxx Don't worry if u didnt get the meaning i meant, it can mean anything u want it to :-) xx

damn i liked it so much ! ! keep it up...i like the way u write. --joann

i loved it! awsoem poem!! keep up the gud work!!!!!! ur a really great riter and your writing gives me pictures in my mind as i read them!!! !
<3 alisha

Thanku so so much :-) xx

Thanku! xx

This poem is so beautiful. I was eatnig chocolate and It made me stop before I put the next piece in my mouth, which is DEFFINITELY saying something :P Your phrasing is amazing hun, I can't believe you wrote this. Don't you ever give up, your poems are inspiring. Well done, Take care of yourself.
x Laura x

Thanku! x

I really liked this poem, and I think I understand the meaning. Well I could relate to it on some level, even if it's not the same one you intended me to. Hey, Ironic Allure said that my poem "Help Her" is alot like on of your poems. If you get the chance to read it, could you tell me which one you think it's like. And hey, feel free to read any other of my poems. It would really mean a lot coming from such a talented person like you. You're amazing, and truthfully, this poem was absolutely stunning!
Luv always, KT

This is another great poem. I love your style and most of the meanings behind your poems. Well Done again.

Andrew Kirkman
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