This is a great poem, both in the core that is entirely your own, and with the inclusion of Anna Nalick's poem. And, I think, regardless of anyone's gender, most people can definitely relate to what you're saying. There's always that person who you hate and admire, all at once, who is able to say what you haven't been able to verbalize, or who simply has the guts, the sheer steel viscera to state what others will never be comfortable in saying.