that was awsome as well as all your other poems i am going to put you on my favorites list and get back to them to vote and comment

Katie, I hope you're doing alright my love! If you need to talk you know where to find me!
Love ya
Sammy
xoxoxo

great poem!!!

Wow. I love your poetry. You have such a way with words (please pardon the cliche), and I love it! Thanx for your comments, and I hope to read more in the future!

~Ciao Lipton

this is such a pretty poem. I can relate to it completly, I love that you chose this subject to write about. The words were tragic and lovely, the whole piece was a dark image, i really liked it.

"My distant stare is vacant
I've lost all hopes and dreams
Warped and thoughtless motions
Blacked out by deadly screams"

I really liked that stance, the dark symbolism really added a tragic effect. good job

I, also, already had you on my favorite list. Your continued talent, hasn't disappointed me yet. Keep up the excellent work.

wow.. you're amazing. your words all seem to have so much meaning.. truly inspiring. keep up the good work, bravo.