I liked you poem it's very true!!

Excellent poem, very well worded. Take care and Keep writing

Very nice idea behind this, however I don't think It's one of your strongest writes.
Alot of the lines, however powerful they were, sounded like they were used just because they rhymed and not because It's purely how you felt.
I'm sorry if you don't agree or if I've offended you. It's just my opinion.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

good one. 5/5 keep it up**

thanks for reading my poems . means alot to me~!!~
xoxoxox
nida