Why Wont you Die?

by David   Dec 9, 2004


My veins run cold,
Your so old,
People yelling,
I'm not telling,
Running in fear,
I hate you your to near,so,
Why wont you die?
Your killing me in side,
Your just screaming,
I'm just leaving to die,
So,
Why wont you die?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Good poem I like how you can get the message across in short verses!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    I like this poem. I understand what you're saying. You've used twisted sentences which adds to the effect. Good work.
    Gurdy x

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