Brilliant Endin really worked good job !!!

Wow this poem was incredibly written... you really captured what that person went through... ended brilliantly... keep up the awesome work =)

xx, PorteR

ps - thx for the comments on my poems

I'm speechless! I guess ya know what that means yea? Amazing!!

Ooooo this poem is on firreeee!! :) excellent! very excellent! crazy and good!

take care hun,

CyN

wow... im speechless! keep it up xxxxx

I couldn't believe I didn't comment on this one! ah, it was unbelievable, your poems take my breath-away, literally! wow, amazing writer you are, keep writing! xxxx

this poem is great. i give you a 5 on this. keep it up

I love it 5/5 ! I love it I love it! With passion and grace! heh Keep it up! Thanks for commenting btw.

it was really good.

Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Wow, weird poem, but good...

That was a great poem. I really got into. Keep it up.
Take Care,
Hannah M.

~ very nice write, keep writing :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Very odd for someone your age to have a poem such as this. I figured that you would be the type to have a party or something or love poems.

Anyways i liked the poem, the beats were ok, they lacked in a few area's but they were really good in most of them. I liked this poem and it was really nice to see it..i enjoy dark poems.

Five/Five.

P.S. Keep commenting and your definately going on my favorites.

omGg.. mAd Poem heheh!! good job hunZ.. i no how u feel.. if u Eva need sum1 2 talk to im here hehe mwAz.. p.s u might like sum of my poems Xoxox

I love the details and the darkness in this poem.. i love all of your poems and the way you have created them. Keep up the good work!

Andrea, omfg, that was magnificent. lol, i hope that isn't a true story, lol, but it was def. a nice one to read. That last part really hit me, lol. Cuz the girl apparently knows she's insane, which in some cases can either be good or bad, not really sure.

What part of Florida do you live in? My dad lives down there and I visit him in the summer in Tampa, Boynton Beach, so many places in Florida that I've visited. Jacksonville is just another. Anyhow, I really liked this poem, Great write and I think you must be extremely popular by the amounts of votes you've received already. Keep it up!!

~Sierra

Thanks for your comments!

Jacksonville is lovely!! I'm sorry to hear that you're not happy there though. Its true that pain does deduct from the overall happiness of the area, but things will hopefully get better. I'm relieved to hear that you like my poems, I know they get a bit annoying, and uh oh, i think I better hurry cuz there's a huge thunderstorm here and the lights are flickering on and off...fuN! lol! ttys, lyl bye!!

*hugs 2 u 2*

~Sierra

Excellent story line. Kept my jaw dropped. lol. Great job! 5/5 >3jess

A very deep and moving poem...you have an excellent talent for words. Keep up the good work!
-Tara