wonderful, wow, im speechless... incredable poem. wow...

that was an awesome poem, you have quite the vivid imagination. The ending was perfect, keep up the good work, and thanks for the comment Id love for you to check out some of my other work.

Amazing.

Failed

aaamazing!! <3

xoxo
Aubs

wow... that was kinda scary. great poem, though! 5/5

wow!!! very good!!! keep writing, dont waste your talent!
love,
~Katie~

Thats was thw greeatest poem that i have ever read! It had wonderful visuals too! good work!

Cool poem..I like how it goes in a story base.
Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~)~~

Cool poem..I like how it goes in a story base.
Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~)~~

I love the darkness of this poem It is so twisted and yet the way I feel at time But i have more control than to kill people that and if there dead i'm alone and again I loved it

Brilliant, ingenius! You are amazing and talented, and the ending just TOOK MY BREATH AWAY! OMG! you are just outstanidng, and there are no words to describe this poem. Wow...5/5

Ohhh !!!!

:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0Its sooooo good......:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0:0

good stuff

a really really good but does not make sence poems its good 5/5

TheRealMan

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT!!!! I WISH I HAD A TALENT LIKE THAT....SERIOUSLY THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! I LOVE THE LAST LINE!! GREAT WORK!!

Great poem. I loved the way it ended. Very well written. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment on my poem. 5/5!!
Jenn.

wow, that poem was great. i love how you wrote it. it was really great, but very sad. keep up the great work. 5/5

thanks for the comment! :)

Serenia

You have an amazing talent, keep up the excellent work.

WOOW......excellent poem!!!! one of the best. read my poetry for me.