Broken and bruised

by confusion   Dec 9, 2004


Ever felt as if you're all alone
although people are all around
ever felt as if you've been kicked to the floor
when really you're stood upon the ground

the walls, they slowly cave in
my heart, it no longer beats
time seems to drag, minutes to hours
this soul fades as ache defeats

the tears have now formed
a never ending stream
my eyes sting from this current
which drowns my every dream

bitter thoughts of you flash back
anger and hate turn to dread
why did you enter my life
just to cause pain and wishing to be dead

how did your mind become so twisted
planning every single move
cautiously threw that hook out
real me in, knowing what id lose

you bruised me, broke me, scarred me
but still it wasn't enough
you stole every final hope
that things wouldn't always be as tough

my rainbows, they have turned
into dark grey clouds and skies
the bunnies ran for cover
so as not to hear your evil lies

those happy feelings you threw away
will take ages to return
all because you played your game
then watched as my heart began to burn

piece by piece, bit by bit
I'm trying to find the old me
struggling to regain my strength
for how much longer will this be?

*all comments or votes would mean a lot.... xXx*

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  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I think everyone feels this way at least one time in their life, some more than others. I'm glad you wrote this cause i can relate to it. Great job! Thanks for commenting on mine by the way. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    Hey your stuff is good. You wrote a comment on mine I appreciate it. And it feels good to know that I don't feel these things alone.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Awww. Hun this poem was so sad. I'm sorry about whoever treated you so badly. Seems to me that most guys are just plain old jerks these days. But anyhow, on a lighter note, your poem was soo amazing! It was written so well and I can say that I definitely can relate to each stanza. Great job! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great poem..I really liked this part,

    the tears have now formed
    a never ending stream
    my eyes sting from this current
    which drowns my every dream

    You allow the reader to feel what you feel, you're very talented..mashalla..keep up the great work!!!

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    u need to change a couple of typos but otherwise a gd poem.