u need to work on the ending but a gd poem generally. dnt leave.

Wow. I loved that peom!! It was great. I hope you're not really that sad. But if you are...please let me help you. Please!
Love ya lots,
Sammy

thqank you so much! i will accept any help out there

whose this about?

honestly, it just came to me

the best poems are the ones you do not think when you write, it just comes to you and you know it. wonderful job! and i miss you too!!!

i relli hope u didnt harm yourself!! this poem is so good and ur too much of a talented poet to lose! ppl need your work! i love your poems, i hope ur ok n i hope to see more of ur gr8 work xxxx