I used the word dove as softness and I'm looking for the thoughts but i cant find them, but i need to find them

ur word choice is so interesting in this one, i still love it tho! good job yet again!
5/5
~*lindz*~

It was good! a few parts were..ehh but it was good overall! it flowed nicely so thats a bonus! the emotion was there too! so a 5/5!! good job!

I dont think its supposed to be funny....but the last part about the tree......sorry apart from the end i think its beautiful

Wow dude seroiusly got its deep thou but i love it keep up the writting u have a talnet

Wow delo again im.... wow speechless