i luvd it! especially the line "everything that is real turned to ashes" luvd! keep writin

very nice poem! it sounded like a great sad song of a tragedy to me. keep writing and thanks for the comments. take care:)

Oh, that is so heartfelt. Reading this poem made me feel that I was connecting with all the sadness that inspired this poem.

It was good to see your updated profile, Amy, but I'm sorry for what you have been through. Here's wishing you blue skies ahead. --Lydia

super job thanks for sharing it !!!