by Danielle Dec 9, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Watching You Across The Room |
by Megan
I didn't understand it at first. I thought that she was alive and he was dead and she was just imagining him being there..sry..i get it now. It was a great poem though! 5/5 |
very good 5/5 |
by Trevor
wow, that was really quite good as a whole poem, i personally didnt like the beginningish part of it but after that it got really really good, keep it up |
by jescelle
you really shouldnt be sorry, it kept me readin until the very end and then my jaw just dropped, totally to the floor lol. it really blew me away.....by the way my AIM is JazzyBb2, im me sometime, or ill try to im you tonight if i remember lol, but great job babe! |
Hey i thought the poem was great...you're very talented keep up the good work and remember if u dont think its good chances are a lot of other people will love it! |