Awesome poem! Everyone has pieces of them they hide. It's awesome though when some one spends the time to get to know you and you feel comfortable enough to let it all out. It's the best feeling in the world. Great job...Keep it up and take care.

thanks for the comment!
wow...i like this poem b/c i understand it a hell of a lot, the way ppl tell me they love me a lot frusterates me and now i can show them this poem to tell them why i get so frusterated, u have put into words of rhyme what i feel when they ask why. great job chick

hey i already know i commented but i saw ur comment u left on nookies poem for bob shank and i just wanted to inform u i have a poem for the man too....nookie got the idea after he read mine and me and him share a lot when it comes to bob in mind...umm i was wondering if you would check out my poem for him too...God bless u.

GREAT STUCTURE HONEST ADVICE

loved it! xoxo
all of your poems are so great!

This is an excellent poem! I just totally loved it! And its so true, cause evryone has bits of themselves they dont want no one to know about so they hide them away.
Well take care,
Rachel

This has great meaning in it. I loved it.

Hey thanks for the comment and im really glad that u like my work. I love yours and can only hope to be as good as writer as you are. Keep it up. SEEEEEEE YA

hey i know ive already commented but, hey i would like to get to know you, just im me sometime:nolittlenomore8. Well ttyl. SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YA