that was beautiful...sometimes it helps to say thanx for ourselves...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>> |
by Lipton
Very interesting! I like! |
by Allen
Nice :) very inspirational :D I love the way your lines flow and rhymes, and I love the ending which shows the stranger is you :) this is a neat poem, keep them up :D take care. |
by FTS Miles
That's simply a great poem, Victoria. Evocative, personal, poignant. |
by Bryce Ellner
Very clever, I love it! Really nice peice. Haven't talked to ya in a while, how's life treating ya? Take care~ |
by vanessa
whoa! i haven't gone to this site for a while, and u juz made me wanna come back again tomoro... truly amazing! |
by vanessa
whoa! i haven't gone to this site for a while, and u juz made me wanna come back again tomoro... truly amazing! |
by snezana
Thats really goooood :D lol |