thanks a lot...smiles*

Wow.. That was Excellent poem!... I dont' know what else to say.. *5/5*... Keep on writing girl;).. God Bless!...
~!~Sedusha~!~

That poem was touching I liked it alot good job!

wow this is great! really it may be short but i really understand it ! i love it! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Hey i love this poem. Yeah i feel like that too sometimes. But i'm here to lend u a hand anytime. Love yah

Great poem with lots of meaning! I really liked it *5*!!!
xoxox

Awww..it's so sad..AWESOME THOUGH!

Chris

Hmm...This is an interesting poem. I like how your third stanza dwells on the idea of being, rather the reality, of being the helpless child.

Its an interesting outcry to societ, and God. I like it. 5/5

God Bless;)

I LOVED EVERY SINGLE LINE!! great job heather!!

great poem i loved it :D
peace