Everyone said...

by rachel   Dec 10, 2004


Everyone tells me to try to move on
Everyone says that he wasn't the one
Everyone said to keep my heart safe
Everyone said to not trust him so deeply
Everyone told me to not make that decision
Everyone said that he would leave me
Everyone said he does things I don't know

I told them I couldn't
I told them he was
I said that I should
I told them I will
I told them he wouldn't
I said that he didn't

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Dedicated to my first Love:Ty

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    great poem, feeling the same in so many ways. hard to let go of the one you love, speshly wen evryone around is telling you to. stay strong, and thanx for the comments, rely means a lot :)

    lu -x-x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven

    wow? just like me... people tell me to move on.. but i just tell them this :alot of people tell me that... they ask me" why do u keep trying when u know it's never gonna work?" i tell them" i know it not gonna work... i know it's jsut a waste of time... but am not gonna stay and let my memorys destroy me and strike me down.... =/ hope you get back together

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