I Love You {Part 4}: Can't

by livefreebright   Dec 11, 2004


It's been a week now
And the tears still flow
Can't go on without you
I have to let you know

But I can't tell you
You're with someone now
I still want you
And I don't know how

Will we ever make it work
Do you think we could try
To piece it back together
Instead of saying goodbye

I can't not be with you
It's killing me inside
Why was I so stupid
Shouldn't let my feelings hide

If you knew how much I cared
Would you give me another chance
Because I can't live without you
Won't you ask for another dance

Maybe this time around
Things will be much better
I can't forget you
It's us, always and forever

to be continued...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fluffy Cotton

    i think your poem is wonderful. it conveys a ppint and emotion that places images in your head. i also liked the form. excellent job!