this was superbly and artistically written with a true talent for connecting words and emotions, in such a way that is not commonplace and typical. originality in expression... superb... truly.

Hmmm, sounds like you don't really want to say WHAT it is, so I don't totally get it, but whatever it is, it's good. nice work, as always.

emma x

AMAZING. I love the passion and ill intensions you create through the piece. The symbols, amazing. intriguing and thoroughly mentioned, tragic and beautiful, absolutly lovely. I really admired the lines,
"Wandering through a shattered home of dead and broken dreams
Where all aspects of hope were shredded at the seams"
I just love the symbolism, I completly admire that meaning and though behind the words. The whole piece is powerful and connecting, sadly dark and absoulutly incredible. Truly a lovely piece worthy of nothing but praise. Excellent work