I LOVE THIS POEM!!! OMG!! YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER!
xxmeggyxx

thank you all...i am going to pray this every night so maybe God will listen and make everyone else happy. loves.

Awwww hun you are blessed, especially with your warm and honest words! Very touching & Very Beautiful:) Excellent Job!

~!~Loving Angel...Sedusha~!~

Woah.

This is one awesome poem/prayer.
The line:
"set all of her sad sad pain free."
Wow I dont know why I just love that...this truly is gorgeous.

[Blessed be the tie that binds us in HIS fellowship;) God Bless you ;)! 5/5]

Wow an absoultly unselfish loving poem really amazing keep it up:)

great poem...iv never read anything like it....i loved it...and thanx so much for the comment....and please keep um coming....keep up the good work and keep up the good work....
god bless you!!

wow huns i loved it ........ it was amazing i envy u loll but truly i do u write sooo good i cant describe it !!!! its all great!!!! and i wont be comein on for a while maybe i wont be comin bak i dont know i hv lots to do here my skool just started im in ur 12 and i hv to work and do other stuff sooo i will see u later and heather if u want to talk or be friends oh i would love too... email me on christina_11_88@hotmail.com
i hv the msger if u want to chat but if u dont want too its fine hunz i dont mind but if u ever feel alone or need to talk i will try my best to always be there for u!!!! sooo mail me if u want if not no probs!!!
oh by the way u looooooookkkkkkk hott in the pic i think ur sooo pretty. see u hunz take care off urself ur amazin keep it up put ur head up and smile :D hehhe byee hunzzzz!!!!

hey very touching poem it's really good work! keep it up i have to read pt two later i gotta go right now though, but if you like poems bout god n stuff you might wanna check out my poems "i pray" then "i answer" and "nobody answered" those are just a couple i think you might really like judging by this poem, well bye bye and take care!

~lil slam~

I love this its a great idea i always pray for my friends and if that chris in the poem is me thanx a lot heather i really appreciate that u care it warms me up inside just knowing that. god bless you 2 peace