My Inevitable Trip

by Ashlee Nicole   Dec 11, 2004


I want to take a trip.
And never come back.
I want to leave it all,
And never look back.

To run and never stop.
I want to up and go.
To just keep on moving,
They would never even know.

Just take my things and run,
To a place where I can be,
Happy by myself,
For no one to ever see.

I also have this theory,
This feeling in my heart.
That I couldn't make it,
I would simply fall apart.

I would be with out them all,
My family and my friends,
I would never see them,
Never going with no end.

I would have to simply do,
What I had planned when I came,
To take my life right here.
With no remorse, no shame.

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  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was alright....i liked the flow except for in the beginning where you rhymed back w/ itself....other then that the flow went nicly. it didnt really make sence to me though....sorry ....maybe you could try revising and going into a bit more detail...though i really liked it i give it a 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Hey, thanks for all your comments, i appreciate them !!!
    I really liked this, i feel this way sometimes, you've expressed yourself really well.
    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    I felt this way to for a long time then i met my bestfriend about a year ago and he change my world. i dont know where i be with out him. this poem is deep and to the point i like that but theres always some one there for us we just have to find them 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    another beautiful write...you are talented...keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>

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