another beautiful write...you are talented...keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>

I felt this way to for a long time then i met my bestfriend about a year ago and he change my world. i dont know where i be with out him. this poem is deep and to the point i like that but theres always some one there for us we just have to find them 5.5

Hey, thanks for all your comments, i appreciate them !!!
I really liked this, i feel this way sometimes, you've expressed yourself really well.
xxx cici xxx

This was alright....i liked the flow except for in the beginning where you rhymed back w/ itself....other then that the flow went nicly. it didnt really make sence to me though....sorry ....maybe you could try revising and going into a bit more detail...though i really liked it i give it a 4/5