by Aya Dec 11, 2004
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
The World War has ended |
by paperdoll
Sounds melancholy. yet imbued with a sense of honour aswell. A few grammatical mistakes (like "strucked" rather then struck, "gasps" when it should be gasp) but I really liked the way the verses were set out and the simplicity of the lines. Well done. |