dang!!! that was good.
it put a smile on my
face. lol : )

haha awesome poem, great job..keep up the good work

xX-Katherine-Xx

thanks again for looking at my stuff..look at my new poem if you get a chance..thanks

wow babe that was awsome! i really enjoyed it. i have a poem like this its called my idea of a wonderful night. you should read it. its not as good as yours but hey. lol anyways great job!
~Kay~

good, really good. loved the way you included the french in there gave it an extra sumthing

I screwed up on a little bit of the grammer and spelling.... Im not very good at french but it seemed like an interesting twist. Its supposed to be "ma cherie" and not "mon" and I think you spell amour amour versus amore but im not posotive. Oh well, so much for perfection lol. Thanks guys.
Loves*

wow really nice work, i have been reading your stuff and really enjoying it you have alot of talent and a very intresting mind.
-Allen

You had me curious, so I wanted to read more, how ever I am running out of time so I will putyou in my favorites so that I can come back read more later. Good poem!!

Amazing..

damn that shit was intense...i wish i could write up shit like this

Wow, that made me wanna call my boyfriend

Muy bueno!!!! lo siento que no hable Francais pero entiende a todo. Muy bueno!

That was hot