by lisa marie
not in all of them. i do because some people are completely clueless on what the whole poem is suppose to be about. |
by Danielle
This poem is so full of wonder...i love it...i also came accross your comment in the depression forum and i completely agree with you....you should check out my quote about that |
by paperdoll
Great imagery created, I felt like I was there. You took a bit of a while to get to the point, but I suppose the suspense wasnt half bad. (Spot the imaptient child you can't take on long car trips: "Are we there yet?") A thoughtful idea and some nice phrases, thought the explanation was uneccesary. Cheers. |
by Robert
this is beautiful. well done. ur really talented. |