My Own Sickness...

by ChildofGod87   Dec 12, 2004


12/11/04
*I wrote this poem this early morning!*

Sneezing...
Coughing...
Blowing your nose a thousand times...
Trying to breath...
Feeling Dizzy...
Feeling tried...
Feeling wondrous thoughts that
you automatically think of...

Feeling sick isn't all to good
...For me being sick is like the "WW III"
that I'm trying to fight!

I turn and move around...
Waking up to a strong couch..
Or even sometimes just can't breath!

For the most parts I'm quite Strong
and try to fight it off!
My guarding angel still by my side
and still tries to touch the pain...
sickness out of me!...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Your eyeliner is laughable

    Very creative. Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Lol .. Nice poem, although not was I was expecting it was still gr8 .. keep up ur awesome work .. ! !
    - Maybeth -

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    omg wow this was creative. good one. i never thought about writing a poem about being sick...just shows your creativity.
    GET WELL SOON....GOD BLESS

    loves.

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    hope u recover fast from ur sickness..take care,,,