comments, mean a lot to people when they are unsure about their work...are you unsure about your work?anyways i think that your poem was almost like a letter rather then a poem.it lacked flow but did have good rythm. umm whoever it is that you miss must mean a lot to you because you seem to be thinking about this person more then normal. i think that you can write like heck yes but you dont seem to put all of your emotions in the poem therefore you seem to be repeating yourself. i liked the theme of the poem and your writing technique.keep rockin the poems
-iyke