Suicide to Heaven(REVISED)

by kid   Dec 12, 2004


I went to bed one rainy night
Then i awoke to a light
A passage way, very bright

Out of bed, i was
Walk into the light, i did

In the corner
Was a kid
The cuts and bruises were hid
The kid, one hand a knife
The kid, other hand his life

A kid I knew from school
A kid, one day, found dead in a pool
Of blood

I begged
I cried, I pleaded for this kid

This kid i know
Died months ago
He was on the news
From the beating
From not eating
The torture from his father and mother
The aggressive fighting from his brother

Self injury, was the answer

They say it was a disease
He inherited from me
To cut yourself when angry
And live in misery

Self mutilation led to suicide
And that is why I also died
I walked into the light
The bright light to heaven

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  • 19 years ago

    by gone back to him

    very good very sad

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Uhh, that is SUPPOSED to say "why" instead of "my" :S excuse my poor proof-reading skills.

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I loved this. First the personifacation of life being held in ones hand, also the way you expanded on my this person caused themselves pain. In no certain terms am i able to describe the actual feeling i felt when i read this. One of pure sadness, maybe?

    ;;--Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    awesome job i really really like it

  • Hey..This is a very sad poem:( I can really feel the sadness as I read it! That makes it really awesome...Thanks for sharing this..keep on writting okay! ^_^