by kid Dec 12, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I went to bed one rainy night |
very good very sad |
Uhh, that is SUPPOSED to say "why" instead of "my" :S excuse my poor proof-reading skills. |
I loved this. First the personifacation of life being held in ones hand, also the way you expanded on my this person caused themselves pain. In no certain terms am i able to describe the actual feeling i felt when i read this. One of pure sadness, maybe? |
by Kia
awesome job i really really like it |
Hey..This is a very sad poem:( I can really feel the sadness as I read it! That makes it really awesome...Thanks for sharing this..keep on writting okay! ^_^ |