Suicide girl

by Driver   Dec 12, 2004


As i lie awake i cry inside
the thoughts of you wont leave my mind
why did you have to leave and go away
i wish it was just you and me for one more day
i lived and breathed just for you
my world has now turned to a darker shade of blue
but your so so far away now
i sit here wandering how
how could you leave me for him
without you my worlds dark and grim
now with the gun drawn to my head
i wander if I'm better off dead
your the only reason i had for living
but now your gone heavens gates look forgiving
bur your so so far away now
i sit here wandering how
how could you leave me for him
without you my worlds Dark and grim
no i didn't give up without a fight
I'm drawn closer and closer to the light
so i pull the trigger i give it a whirl
I'm saying goodbye to you suicide girl

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  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Haunting. Very well written. I like the style and flow of your poetry. 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Haunting. Very well written. I like the style and flow of your poetry. 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Fivers for you driver!
    very nicely written
    the "him" that she leaves for who is he?? is he some other guy or could it be god (if you belive in him,and all)??
    i loved it though
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem's pretty cool, I liked the ending:

    I'm saying goodbye to you suicide girl

    I think there's some 'your' that you should change for 'you're'. It happens to me all the time.

    Good job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 19 years ago

    by Stef

    Wow. Just...wow.
    Where did you learn to write?!
    -Stef

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