Comments : Shattered

  • 19 years ago

    by Mlkdipdcookie ©

    i like. it's simplistic, but it still says so much. that's cool, cuz not a lot of people know how to do that. and nice conclusion. great job. ;-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    great, meaningful poem... this part:

    Trying to solve myself riddle

    is a little confusing... but still an AWSOME poem!