A lonely thing

by Lushed   Dec 12, 2004


Life can be a lonely thing mother,
When death plays it's part.
It's hard to know you wont be there.
To know you can't heal my broken heart.
I wasted so much time.
Being angry and upset.
But I could hear you crying.
He never let you rest.

It's hard to be happy,
without you by my side.
It's hard to be anything,
When I'm dying of grief inside.

What if i got up?
And asked you what was wrong?
Why cant i go back?
Why do you have to be gone?

My life's now a lonely thing mother,
Because death has played its part.
Just let me hear her voice once more.
I cant stand being apart.
Let be see her face once more.
Let her help me fix my shattered heart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    Lots of emotion
    i think it is beautiful (whih is odd coming from me cause i don't say beautiful) in other words 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    awesome. I really loved the way you
    wrote thim poem. you're really really
    talented. keep it up.
    love you,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, thanks for the review and sorry i havent posted many new poems, if you read my profile-thing it kind of explains why, but i appreciate it... thanks anyways... i really like the last stanza, nice word choice... great work

  • 19 years ago

    by *tears*

    What a great poem...I loved it. It is soo sad and expresses your feelings so good.
    And thank you for your comments on my poems. They really meant a lot to me.....Thank you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Welcome to my Favorites.

    Excellent poem...I absolutle love this. Such deep pain and suffering. I love how you remark to your mother twice: "My life's now a lonely thing mother."

    A truly awesome piece. 5/5

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