Comments : Virtue

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    "When ignorance could have rushed me into impulse I neglected laughter."

    Wow, you certainly know how to put together a few words and turn them into something powerful. I love your use of symbolism, and i absolutly love the last line. great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Thank you for your words.

    I have my eye out for more of yours ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Such an obfuscated figure... not the clear presentations of character revealed before... or is there truth in the darting nature? I think this introspection is terribly insightful and poignant. How often do we all become something that we'd rather not be? Or enact the proverbial trine denial?

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This feels like listening in on somebody's narrative lines from a really unusual play....almost too esoteric.........but not quite......

    Brilliant, actually...bravo..