Story so old

by ShadowedPhoenix   Dec 12, 2004


I will tell you a story
A story often told
And if you know me,
You would know I've made it old.

I cannot help that my life is plain,
or that love is my only pain.
I love to easy, without a fight
I have no walls,no boundaries and to me it feels right

I don't understand,
I gave into your every command,
So did I do something wrong?
For love and my life is suddenly gone.

I loved you with everything I had,
I loved him till it drove me mad
I loved him, He loved her
And for this pain there is no cure.

I shall now close this storybook
And for love in another place I'll look
He can't be the OnLy perfect boy,
There must be one for me
I'll find him in another book maybe?

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  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Omg! thats such a cute poem kinda sad but still really cute i love it!!! keep writting ur great!! comment mine i want to no wat ppl think about them

    thanx
    brittany

  • 19 years ago

    by BabyGurl

    omig words cant explain how good that was ! I loved it ! i cant totally relate i fall in love so easly ! always babygurl

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    wow again i can relate to this and the feeling sux but you have a very good way of expressing it.

  • thats cool, i like using the idea of the book, its original

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome, awesome poem! i love this part:

    I will tell you a story
    A story often told
    And if you know me,
    You would know I've made it old

    great work!