awwww thats such a kool poem! i really like it because it is so directand its well written. gives the poem a very mellow feeling

Such a cool idea for a poem. Keep it up. <33 Erin

this poem was well written. good job

great poem as usual. its exactly what im goin through right now as u no ! keep it up
- shell x

aww this is a really sweet poem, it fits together really well. i like it!
good job
jemma xxx

loved it :D
~hugs and kisses~
xoxo

Great poem. I really like this. It is a little short though, if you added more detail it would be even better but that is just my opiion. It is still great. Keep up the good work.

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awesome, awesome poem! i love this part:

I will tell you a story
A story often told
And if you know me,
You would know I've made it old

great work!

thats cool, i like using the idea of the book, its original

wow again i can relate to this and the feeling sux but you have a very good way of expressing it.

omig words cant explain how good that was ! I loved it ! i cant totally relate i fall in love so easly ! always babygurl

Omg! thats such a cute poem kinda sad but still really cute i love it!!! keep writting ur great!! comment mine i want to no wat ppl think about them

thanx
brittany