Great poem but personally i don't think you should hide how you feeling coz it will only hurt more in the end, I used to hide my feelings but now i just say how I'm feeling! But if you wanna talk I'm here!
xoxo

Sent shivers down my spine, brilliant, the way you planned it out, you can tell thought has gone in to it
Defiantly a 5
6 if it where possible lol