Nice poem, I don't have much more to say :| I gave it a five though, it's extremely creative

I really like it. Cheer up buddy, you're a great poet you should be happy.

Wow KT! That was awesome... keep it up! As i say to you a lot, you have talent!

-5-

Love you loads,

xx, PorteR

WOW I can only say WOW that was excellent....5/5 keep up the good work!!!

Beautifully dark- well written, it's just great to come across uniquely written poems on this site. I loved it- simple yet with exquisite description.
Btw- I love your display picture, did you draw it? Or something you came across?

O *blushes embarrassdly* I've read this poem before... heh... well, there's my memory for ya ;)
Sorry for the repeat of comment... I honestly have the worst memory ever.

that was really an awesome poem...wow..im really impressed...great job!

I so like ur poems! u indeed have an awesome tanlet. Keep writing.
Luv,
Noziyna

I so like ur poems! u indeed have an awesome tanlet. Keep writing.
Luv,
Noziyna

that was really good!! keep it up!! and thanks for the comment!! :)

FANTASTIC!!! gotta love the darkness o_O

I got sick of the word 'with' after reading this poem...try not to over-kill a word next time...

That rhyming was peerfect. It had moving words to it and it got to the point. Great poetry. -YM

I really enjoy reading your poetry, thanks again so much for your comments, i will take them into consideration! you've done an awsum job with your poetry also!
luv em