by FireCracker Dec 13, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
Tell my head |
by yo yo yo
i reallly like this poem i wish i had told my head to tell my heart to stop lol. i really like all ur poems ur a great writing keep up the good work lol. |
shyt...i loved this poem...but was it ok to laugh...man i was feeling it...the title drawed me in but the poem kept me movin great job. |
by ChildofGod87
Wow...Maybeth:) I was very Excellent and may I say "BRAVO"...hehe... ooops I did..lol.. I can really relate to that:D.. Yeah, it's kinda hard though to have someone move out of your life when they already put themselves there with the lies and crap like that!!! (Hopefully, I'm making sense..lol..) ~5/5~ Thank you for commenting on my 2 poems girl:) I loved to hear from you:D..lol.. Well, Keep on writing and Keep in touch:) God Bless you and Guide you:)!!!!! |
by Dark Savior
this poem seems to be a big time rant. i know that your venting but the sylibils don't seem to match up with one and other and you seem to miss a beat or two *please don't take this as bad thing...i think your a wonderful writer, i am just trying to offer constructive critism * |
by GirlieLovexx
wow such a fantastic piece of writing u are truley talented keep them coming FIVE .... |