Perfect in my eyes

by MeL JoY   Dec 13, 2004


I love those deep brown eyes
Eventhough they weren't true
Though you've done me wrong
I love everything you do

I long for your warm touch
Though for you it was only lust
I admire your personality
Though I know you weren't just

I'm dreaming of your love
Though I know it won't be there
I know that there's no chance
That you'd ever really care

So hard you made me cry
But still you can make me smile
Though I just wasted my time with you
No time was more worthwhile

I want you by my side
Though I know you'd again lie
I know that you can't love me
But for your love I'd die

Though I know I'd end up sad
I wish for a new start
Though I know you'd break it
I would still give you my heart

Cause I don't understand myself
But despite all the lies
You always were and ever will
Be perfect in my eyes..

~Love makes blind~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    It was really good.=) It shows some real emotions one feel when he/she is regected.=) About the poem it was written well and it ryhmes but some didn't. If you make your poem ryhmes keep ryhming so that the flow will not be intrerupted.=) All in all it was really good poem I give it a 5!=)

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    wow.. very romantic and sweet... the silly guy doesn't know how lucky he is. *sigh* how I wish I have someone that feel the same way for me.... but yeah, great writing :) keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    thanks a lot!!
    im glad about every single comment!!
    of course ima check out yours too!
    MeL

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    You've probably heard this a thousand times before bcuz you have so many comments, but i reli do tink your poem is fantastic
    it perfectly describes how i was wen i fell for a certain boi, he didnt care bou me, but yet i stil loved him
    plz read, vote n comment on my poems.
    it would mean so much to me
    thnx x

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    I really like your poem, I can really relate. Very good poem.

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